Score: 6

"Good idea, though actual game could be improved."

submission: Dodge the pedophile

date: July 13, 2008

I absolutely love the idea of the game. The theme is original, and ludicrous--the perfect fit for Newgrounds. However, I didn't care too much for the game play. It would have been nice if Ralph remained either in the air or crouched for a longer period of time. The fact that he's quite quick with his actions makes it difficult to operate the boy.

Still, I'm adding this to my favorites as I think it should receive attention. :)

Score: 9

"Great fun!"

submission: Through the Machine

date: June 10, 2008

Pretty damn difficult, but I'm using a track pad, so I pretty much sucked at it. I can't imagine it'd be fun while using a mouse, and if it worked, a Wiimote.

My favorite part was definitely the fact that the obstacles were synced with the music. Very aesthetically pleasing, muh man.

Score: 2

"Yikes, too simple, etc."

submission: Spanish Quiz!

date: May 11, 2008

This "quiz" was way too simple. Most of the questions had to do with some form of ir. A better Spanish quiz would have dealt with more than just that verb and some random vocab.

Also, the visuals were horrible, as was the transitioning of questions... A bit random for Pac Man to be the thing to click on to advance.

Score: 1

"Needs to be longer"

submission: short combo

date: May 3, 2008

Newgrounds should be a bastion of completed works, works with something more than a short, simple loop. Make the loop longer, perhaps by a half a minute, and add some conflict (actual combat with someone/something else), and it would pass much better. I can tell that you can animated quite well just from this short you've created, so I see no reason why you couldn't make it better.

Score: 7

"McGruff is an asshole"

submission: MrGruff- De Gruff Express

date: February 22, 2008

You did a fine job portraying the asshole of atheist McGruff. Perhaps this will spread awareness of how awful of a goat he is.

Score: 8

"Nice movie, but there's room for improvement."

submission: Ed Gein Episode 1

date: October 28, 2006

Great animation, but what I didn't like was that the characters usually had the same facial expressions throughout the movie. Maybe that was just because they were playing poker, but if not, try to mix it up; get their faces to look like what a person would do in each situation. A good example is when the guy with dark brown hair says "It's an appetizer, you clod."

Some parts in the movie are stretched out where no one talks. It's not natural. When the man saws the table in half, the movie is focused on him for a bit too much after he cuts the table; the frame should switch right to the other characters' faces after he cut the table so we could see their instant reactions.

This looks like a promising series so far, so keep it up. It reminds me of Ren & Stimpy, which is a great show.

Score: 1

"Not good"

submission: Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 80

date: October 25, 2006

The graphics in this movie really need a spit-shine. They remind me of something I would have seen in a Flash movie 5 years ago. As time goes on, the bar of average quality is raised, and this movie doesn't meet that at all.

There's no originality. Hitler made it back, safe and sound. Had Hitler faced something besides getting back to Germany, this entry would be more enjoyable. The simple resolution of reaching Germany is dull, even if this was the point of the entire series. Spicing it up by adding another obstacle to overcome would have made this movie better.

Good sound, though. Gotta love Mindless Self Indulgence and Queen.

Score: 6

"You didn't get all of Beowulf in!"

submission: Beowulf's Tale of Awesome

date: October 13, 2006

I read Beowulf last year, which was a great epic poem. Plenty of hot scantily-clad women, Internet memes, tweens... Wait a minute.

For a school project, this was nice. How'd you do? Did many people get the jokes? :)

Even as simply an entertaining Flash movie on Newgrounds, it did all right. The slow start in the beginning was annoying, even if that was the joke, but the rest was good.

Also, you only got to the Grendel fight! What about Grendel's mother and the dragon? We need MO.

Score: 7

"Olskoo"

submission: @@@@@ 6 @@@@@

date: October 10, 2006

Reminds me of the earlier stuff I've seen on Newgrounds. Good shit.

keep it real dawg

Score: 10

"Great movie!"

submission: Flash Comedy Extravaganza

date: July 11, 2006

This is the first time a Flash movie has made me laugh in a long time. I'll really have to watch your other movies and show my friends this; I'm sure they'll love it too. Congrats on getting monthly top 5.